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E-mails: Expanding Your Sphere of
Influence Through Better Business Communications
By Jane Watson
You know the ones: e-mails that are riddled with spelling and punctuation
errors; writing styles that seem to be an outpouring of random thoughts; or
requests for action that are vague or difficult to interpret.
Here are some rules for writing e-mails to expand your sphere of influence:
To ensure the receiver actually opens your e-mail, hook the reader with the
subject line. If you have a deadline, place it here, as well as in the body.
Start your message with the person's name. (Never use Dear in an e-mail.) If
you are writing to a number of people, begin with an informal word such as,
greetings or team.
Your first paragraph should tell the reader why he should read your message.
The following paragraphs provide necessary details; the final paragraph
states the action required. Never write in a chronological fashion. Today's
readers don't have time for once-upon-a-time writing.
E-mails were designed for quick messages requiring quick responses. Most
people dislike e-mails that go beyond three screen scrolls. Keep paragraphs
under five lines long and use numbered lists whenever possible.
Before hitting the send key, check your e-mail for spelling and grammar
errors. People won't tell you about it, but they'll certainly remember you
if your e-mails don't project a professional image.
E-mails can come across as abrupt and demanding. Remember the words of
courtesy, please and thank you; explain why you need an action taken.
Original: I need the figures by Friday. Revised: Please e-mail me the
figures by Friday so I can complete the ABC proposal.
End your e-mail with a warm close, Regards, Thank you, Cheerio, TTFN.
Don't send e-mails to "strut your stuff." Send them only to people who need
the information.
About the author:
©2002, Jane Watson is dedicated to advancing business communications.
She is a consultant, author, keynoter and trainer and can be reached at jane@jwatsonassociates.com
or (905) 820-9909.
www.jwatsonassociates.com
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