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The Not-So-Effective Cover Letter
By Linda Matias
 Here’s a newsflash: Cover letters work, plain and simple. This is why I’m
intrigued by the fact that a) jobseekers rarely submit them and b) hiring
managers seldom read them. As a result, I started asking questions.
Specifically, “What’s your problem with cover letters?” Here’s what I found
out.
Jobseekers claim all the pertinent information is included in the resume.
Translation: “I don’t know how to write an effective cover letter so I just
scrap it.” Hiring managers say cover letters serve no purpose. Translation:
“Jobseekers don’t know how to write an effective cover letter so I’d just as
soon not be bothered.”
Top 3 Reasons Most Cover Letters Don’t Work
1. The one-size-fits-all method. Hiring
managers are extremely jealous. Although they are aware you are courting
other companies, they want to know that you at least care enough to hide it.
Solution: Avoid form letters. Instead, customize each letter with the
hiring organization and the position in mind. Here’s an example.
“With over nine years of HRIS and human resources experience, I have had the
opportunity to contribute strong, sustainable improvements within the HR
functions, particularly in areas of systems development, implementation, and
maintenance.
When I read the job description posted on your corporate website, I was
immediately drawn to the similarity between your requirements and my
experience. In particular, I meet your prerequisite for an HRIS Specialist
who has the ability to train end users effectively in a variety of
applications and processes. From my enclosed resume, you will note that I
approach end-user training with a patient, diligent manner.”
2. I want, I need, I must have. Me, me, me.
That is the approach many candidates take when writing their own cover
letter. This self-centered approach, without a doubt, backfires every time.
Solution: Focus the letter on how you can benefit the hiring
organization. Here’s an example.
“The following are examples from two different employers that illustrate my
ability to integrate time- and cost-saving solutions for the HRIS
infrastructure:
For XYZ, I implemented an entirely new HRIS system that affected data and
records for 25,000 team members, expediting processes by converting our
applications to Lawson as the company grew at a breakneck pace.
For ABC, I eliminated a slow-moving manual process and developed a system
from the ground up that processed commissions for 700 people, leading to a
reduction of three processing days per month.”
3. Taking a “pretty please” approach. No
one wants to hire a desperate jobseeker.
Solution: The tone of the cover letter must be kept on a professional
level. Here’s an example.
“In addition to technology and problem-solving skills, what I also offer is
the ability to create and maintain data tables, structures, files, interface
requirements, and data integrity protocols for ongoing administration.”
Cover Letters Can Win Job Interviews
Persuasive, targeted, and commercial-like cover letters fare well. And that
is exactly what a cover letter is—a commercial, starring your experience.
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Recognized as a career expert, Linda Matias brings a wealth of experience to
the career services field. She has been sought out for her knowledge of the
employment market, outplacement, job search strategies, interview
preparation, and resume writing, quoted a number of times in The Wall Street
Journal, New York Newsday, Newsweek, and HR-esource.com. She is President of
CareerStrides and the National Resume Writers’ Association. Visit her
website at
http://www.careerstrides.com or email her at
linda@careerstrides.com.
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